Sunday 6 April 2014

Notebook 001: Gin Jawed Dogs

I was meant to be concentrating in my Writing Short Fiction class, but didn't, instead experimenting with some asemic poetry, specifically manipulating the haiku format. I did a little work with this last semester in an introductory Creative Writing Unit and it hasn't quite got out of my head. I did complete the set task of developing a list of metaphors/similes though, as seen on the first scanned page.

This is what I was able to develop in about ten minutes:


Gin jawed dogs loosed the
guns > RABBITS RUN RUN RABBITS
RUN RABBITS RUN - Done. 



Speaking the poem aloud now I think the rhythm count is a bit off. I might develop it a little more later. 




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